RR through our eyes (Chapter 25)
The wonderful Parud VM attached below is by none
other than our Amy (Preggy of IF )
No edits from Mano this week. Wishing her a speedy
recovery
The word secret when used as an
adjective means “not known or seen or not meant to be known or seen by others”.
And it is one of the very few adjectives which can adorn any noun out there.
Secret revenge
Secret thought
Secret fear
Secret hope
Secret wish
Secret recipe
Secret jealousy
Secret admiration
Secret past
Secret dream
And then comes the noun which
encompasses all of the above. Like a black hole. “SECRET”
Almost everybody has secrets. At
least at one point of time or other. And yes Ranawats and Mehras were no
different.
Kakusa – He was the soft spoken boy
of the haveli. Always hiding behind his more adventurous more sharp tongued
elder brother. He loved and admired his brother Dilsher and it was reciprocated
as well. Till the day a girl walked into Dilsher’s life. A girl who was meant
for Danveer but who stole Dilsher’s heart. A girl as soft spoken and mild
mannered as Danveer but as luck would have it – opposites attract. That is from
Dilsher’s side to start with. And that was a turning point in all their lives.
Four of them caught in a web of lies and deceit and hatred from that very
moment. Unknown to his Dilsher, Danveer had already had a glance of Mala a few
days back. After all that was the deal between the parents. Elder boy for the elder
girl and the younger boy for the younger girl. So Danveer had no qualms about
going all the way to Mala’s village to just get a glance of her. And he did and
was bowled over. And that fated day he had to make the biggest sacrifice of his
life. For his brother, Dilsher, who always protected him from the bullies in
the class. For his brother who always sacrificed every good thing in his life
for his younger brother. And to add salt to the wound he got Mohini in return.
A girl with no love in her heart. Who had her eye only on the haveli and who
had her hatred set upon her only sister and her husband. Danveer had been happy
- even though for a fleeting second - when Mala eloped. But Rudra’s pain did
affect Danveer. The pain of that sweet girl Paro also affected him. He was
thankful that he could dissuade Paro from discharging that gun in the BSD
office on Rudra and later on herself. Rudra going around like a Jallad was not
acceptable to Danveer. And he could finally get Rudra back at the haveli. Along
with his family. After all Danveer was not like his wife – who hated everything
related to Mala. He never hated Mala or her son. Danveer could never get
Mohini’s approval – not even after three kids and years of living together. But
he did not hate her either as he was grateful that she did not run away leaving
him and his children behind. He never forgave his brother for what he did and
in parts paid him back by meeting Mala in secrecy and postponing her coming to
the haveli or meeting her son and ex husband. By always keeping her at arm’s
distance so that his brother will repent that fateful day all his life. That
was his secret revenge.
Mohini - never kept her hatred for
Mala under cover. It was open for all to see. She was convinced that Mala was
as strategic and cunning as herself and had intentionally met Dilsher before
Mohini could meet him. And took away what was rightfully hers. The haveli and
all the money which came with it. She hated Dilsher for choosing Mala over her.
She hated Danveer for not having the guts to refuse to marry Mohini. She
herself could not refuse. Her father’s wrath and fascination for trigger was
well known. She hated Danveer for not being man enough to boss over her. How
much she would have liked to have a more powerful and more intelligent person
as her husband. But no, it was Mala who got that as well – not once but twice.
Mohini could not believe that Mala had found such a great life as Thakurain –
wife of the powerful and rich Thakursa. Had she known it earlier she would have
had a deal with BSD and trapped the Thakursa and handed him over to the
officers. Thus taking away from Mala all that she had. But luck was not with
Mohini. It was that stubborn girl of Rudra , that Dhuakumari, who did the
honours. And got into the haveli as Bahu later. And gave Dilsher what Danveer
could never get. A grandson – an heir to the Ranawat family. Luck always
favoured Rudra ever since Mala ran away. First he was lucky to get Paro who
loved him with all her heart. And now he has got Myrah - who is probably one of
the richest Mohini has ever met – who is adamant on marrying him. Over the
years Mohini has learnt one thing. She never kept her hatred hidden and it got
her nothing in return. It is better to keep the secret thoughts to one self and not to disclose. One may get a good
name after all.
Maithili - had always been submissive
in the haveli. Particularly put up with her Mohini’s taunts and atrocities.
Always acted as if she is the ever sacrificing daughter-in-law who will stick
to the house – no matter what. The truth was not so simple. Maithili had come
from a very poor family. Who were well to do at some point of time. Not to the
tune of the Ranawats but still well to do. But over the years her brothers had
split the property and mismanaged the wealth to the extent that they no longer
had any means to support their only sister. Nor did they have any interest or
time. Maithili had nowhere to go. And she loved Samrat. Though she despised the
fact that he never took even a tiny step to support her. Maithili had no other
way but to act as if she is fine with Mohini and that she loved this haveli and
the people inside with no ill feelings. She had great admiration only for two
people in this family. For Rudra and for Paro. Two people who stood up for her
when her own husband could not. And now Myrah. Who supported Mythili and could
get her what she always wanted. A baby girl for her own. Mythili will always be
indebted to Myrah. It is another matter that when she first arrived on the
scene and Rudra developed feelings for her, Mythili objected to it with full
vigour. Mythili had a secret fear. Though
she never shared her fear with anybody else. Her fear of losing Dhruv as a son.
But now Mythili had no fear of that sort. Now she has her own baby – whom nobody
can take away from her. Or so she believed.
Dhruv – had just got opened his
eyes. Still feeling drowsy he looked around in his bed. And saw his Mummy
sleeping next to him. His Mumma for him. He knew from the day he met that it is
indeed his Mumma. In a different dress. But with the same love and affection in
her eyes. The same tenderness in her hands. He was too young to remember her
touch as per Koel. But he disagreed. He could instantaneously know her touch.
When she pats his head or strokes his cheek. When she bends and hugs him tight.
When she pulls him into a hug in the night. It was his Mumma indeed. But Papa
had never agreed when he voiced it. And later somehow Koel’s strategy worked.
When he started saying Mumma Ne Bheja Myrah Ko, his father agreed. So Dhruv
stuck to that strategy and called her Mummy. Though he had a secret hope - that the day will come
soon when he can openly call her his Mumma.
Koel also opened her eyes. And
looked around. She was alone in the bed. Before Naina arrived, Maithili Tai used
to make Koel sleep in her room. Sometimes Dhruv too slept in the same room though
he wanted to be next to his father most of the times. The bond Dhruv had with
his father was something Koel always wished she had. Neither her father nor mother were like
normal parents. But then she had Maithili and Samrat and Koel was happy with
that. Till baby Naina arrived. And till Myrah arrived. Now Dhruv has Myrah who
is doting on him all the time. And Naina has her mother’s attention all the
time. Even Saurabh had a great set of parents whose life starts and ends with
him. Koel had a secret wish. That one
fine day she will wake up and see that her parents have changed and that they
will shower her with all the love in the world.
Shatabdi had great luck. Though
she got Mohini as her mother-in-law, she could escape entering the haveli as a
second wife. Samrat would never have agreed to the same. But Shatabdi and her
family were unaware that he was married. There is a GOD who helped her. Now her
life is dedicated to making Mohini’s life as miserable as possible. Mohini has
kind of lost her hold on two out of the three things dear to her. One- the
haveli (which now belonged to Rudra – because registration in the name of
Samrat, Sumer and later Mohini – was given back to Rudra by the ever Mahan father-in-law
of hers). Shatabdi felt sad about losing the fortune but then the sadness on
Mohini’s face cheered her up. Two - On the grandson – with Maithili adopting
Naina and Shatabdi not willing to go through another delivery which will spoil
her figure. Shatabdi was quite happy when a daughter was born to her and not a
son. Not that she herself preferred one over another. It was just for the sake
of seeing unhappiness on Mohini’s face. The third thing dear to Mohini was her
Achar business. Shatabdi spent her days and nights to find that secret recipe for the Achar which will
put Mohini to shame. The only way to get back at Mohini was to make something
better than her Achar. Shatabdi was sure of that. And she will keep
experimenting to get the recipe right.
Samrat was afraid of his mother
from childhood. He had taken up after his father. Very quiet and never looking
for a confrontation. And he learnt from his father. To keep quiet in front of
Mohini. To do what she wants without questioning so that he can avoid getting
stung by her words. But still she never spared him. Was always trying to put
him down for not having a successful business, for not having a baby, for not
able to control his wife.......Many a times he had been tempted to tell his
mother that only if his own father had been able to control his wife !! But he
never had the guts to say anything to her. And he jealous of a few people in
the haveli. His TauSa when he was alive, Rudra, paro when she was around and
now Myrah. The reason for the secret jealousy
was simple. All of them could stand without flinching in front of Mohini and question
her. But he never shared this secret with anybody. Not even with Maithili.
Sumer. Who had nothing but secret admiration for Rudra. Inspite of
hitting Rudra in childhood and getting hit by him. Inspite of feeling anger
towards Rudra for tempting him with money to marry Paro knowing very well that
she loved him. Inspite of Rudra accusing Sumer wrongly for poisoning him. Sumer
secretly admired Rudra. For being able to make a multi millionaire like Myrah
fall in love with him. Only if he had that kind of talent, he could have
escaped the clutches of this damned haveli and his spiteful mother.
Both Poonam and Rajeev could
not sleep the entire night. That photo of Paro was a shock for both of them. An
exact replica of Myrah. They could not even close their eyes. Because Paro’s
face floated in front of them. Al the earlier fears and worries which they
experienced years back came flooding into their minds. They did not even want
to switch on the lights lest somebody walked in asking whether things were
okay. Nothing was okay with the two of them. They just lied down next to each
other holding each other and sobbing in the thick of the night. The tears they
had collected within themselves like a dam could no longer be contained. Their secret past was here to haunt them.
Then there is our hero. Rudra
Paratap Ranawat. Who returned to his room with Paro and put her to sleep next
to Dhruv. She was right. He never had to fight for her hand last time. He just
grabbed her from the border and brought her home. Never asked anybody’s
permission – not even hers. And she offered her love to him on a silver platter.
Just like that. Oh this time things are different. Yes she did love him now
also. But he had much more work cut out for himself. Smiling he touched Paro’s
hair and stroked them. His thoughts went to his only secret dream nowadays. The one he dreams of – Sothe Jaagthe. The
dream he has with his eyes open and eyes closed. While driving, while working,
while eating , while lying down. A dream that Paro will just get up one morning
and remember everything. A dream which made him smile thinking of the day when
it will happen. A dream which made him sad that it has not already occurred.
Hale dil, Haal-e-dil
Tumse kaise kahoon
Yun kabhi aa ke mil
Tumse kaise kahoon
Yaado'n mein
Khwabo'n mein
Aapki chhab mein rahe
Haale dil, Haal-e-dil
Tumse kaise kahoon
Oh hum toh udhad se rahe
Hoth yun sil se rahe
Tere hi zulfo'n ke gane
Yun toh sau khat bhi likhe
Karpan mein rat bhi liye
Teri kahani dohrake
Kabse yeh Keh rahe..
Aapki chab mein rahe
Haal-e-dil, Haal-e-dil
Tumse kaise kahoon
Haal-e-dil, Haal-e-dil
Tumse kaise kahoon
Yaadon mein
Kaboon mein
Aapki chab mein rahe
Haal-e-dil, Haal-e-dil
Link to the Parud VM incase you cannot see it below.
Good Morning JJ,
ReplyDeleteThought I would check the blog and found a new Chapter.
Love the bios of the characters and their "secrets".
I am so looking forward to finding out the Mehra's "secret past".
Enjoyed reading this update.
I am going to re-read it later in the evening...gotta get to work.
Take care.
Kerie
You are first again. Today is a special day for me. So I had to post the 25th Chapter - that too with the VM. Please watch the VM after re-reading the chapter. It is done very well. Will wait to hear your looooooooong comments.
DeleteJJ, would like to be the first one to post in IF since got late the last time.
ReplyDeleteFirst of all the way you started the chapter was something unique. Keep the person guessing what the writer is getting upto. wonderful
You were going to unravel many secrets today and this is the quote for the occasion
"Before a secret is told, one can often feel the weight of it in the atmosphere"
I read the chapter twice, still feel it didn' quite sink in. And no I do not mean it in a wrong way. You have given a lot of subtle hints in the chapter and to say it is one of the most beautifully written chapter.
When I say didn't sink it means I am not able to identify the SECRET you are trying to tell us.
First of all Kakusa got his revenge.
Second Maithili overcame her fear.
Kakisa is too open about her hatred but Myrah being rich, she is fine with everything that is going on,
Dhruv, Koel and Shatabdi - are of the innocent lot simple secrets, nothing that will harm others.
Sumer - a surprise , he actually admires Rudra
The Mehras - They know about Paro or to say about Myrah's lookalike. They know that Myrah is Paro. I really felt their pain. the fear of losing a daughter again.
Rudra - his secret is not so secret because it is what we the readers too want - for his Paro to remember everything.
And now the last - Samrat could he be the mole. Jealousy is like a mental cancer which eats up your brain. Samrat for me here is the weakling who though good at heart can be twisted by anybody.
Amy - the VM was amazing.The memories were more ours than Rudra's. While in the ealrier chapter Rudra expressed his love for Paro in words, the VM was his heart's song to Paro.
Amy and JJ just wonderful.
Mano be back well soon. Missing your edits.
And now JJ your secret - something you tell everybody to tell nobody
Dear Reshma, Thanks dear for taking the time out and replying early. And for commenting in detail. I am so glad you liked it. And yes the VM was wonderful wasn't it ? The moment I heard the song I was hoping to get a VM done on Parud. And luckily Preggy agreed.
DeleteYes it is difficult to fully sink in because there are secrets and there are secrets. What will change the course of one's life is difficult to predict.
Missing Mano's edits. Hope she will be back for the sensuous chapter coming very soon...........
PS: You are not able to identify the secret because I have not said it YET. And the SECRET is .........well let us wait and see - right ?
Ok me here too! Big smile
ReplyDeleteThough I read the chapter as we were speaking on Twitter I was writing here but could not post it earlier. Went off to see few more Parud VMs'.
The chapter has been great JJ. You touched that part of RR which really needed some detailing.
We never came to know why Mohini hated Mala ...all they showed were fillers really and not the same plot. It was rushed. It would have made for some great episodes if all this had played out.
It would have been great had it been shown how she was the catalyst in Mala leaving the house or how tension emerged betweeen Dilsher and her. Was Mohini behind it all ?
Everyone has secrets and this is true... from Maithli to Mala... to Sumer..Samrat... Kakusa... Dhruv..Koel ...and Rudra too.
His biggest secret is gaping at him on his face. Myrah who is Paro really and Rudra has to be careful in winning her over this time because there are a lot of other things involved unlike last time when Paro gave her to him so easily!
The Mehras' have a secret too I am sure which you have not disclosed! I think they know that Myrah is not their daughter but I shall wait for your story to progress. Wink
Amy's VM is really good. It goes well with the last paragraph of the chapter where Rudra is remembering his moments with Paro!
You know that face of Rudra and his smile in the car is so fake...it kind of reminded me again of the crap that happened in RR.
when will I get over it !!! Have I gone mad ? It has been long that RR ended...and I still feel this way ...it does not take me one moment to go back to that time and I fear even recalling it! But it just comes and strikes me!
Hi Ruchi,
DeleteThank you for taking the time out to comment. And such lovely comments. And yes I knew you will like the VM. Well Amy had already made the VM so there was no time to remove the first scene of Rudra. But then I thought he was smiling to himself thinking of Paro. What the !!
More secrets are going to come out. And a very sensuous chapter too - soon.......
We have all gone mad about RR. No doubt.
Hi JJKKL
ReplyDeleteYou have given us a very nice update written on a very different note. I found it very interesting to read how each one of the family have their own secret thoughts. & a very good VM
Nandhu
Thank you Nandhu. What is your IF id dear ?
DeleteGlad you liked the chapter and the VM
My twitter id is daydreamerday68
DeleteNandhu
JJ,
ReplyDeleteThis was very interesting and different update, which I did not expect. I assumed that you are continuing from where the story was stopped last time, so this was a surprise - pleasing though.
I have unpleasant experiences of secrets. That's why I was prejudiced when I started reading the chapter.
But this was perfect, just brilliant update.
You've managed to bring out secrets that have long been under the surface. Like Koel – innocent girl, who just wants her parents to love/care. Sumer was not a surprise for me; somehow I thought that he always appreciated Rudra (secretly, perhaps yes).
Mohini-Mala and their complicated past....
Samar – a secret jealousy. This is a bit worrying. Jealousy can be a destructive emotion, and it can also lead to extreme action. I hope not this time?
But I am particularly interested in Mehra’s secrets – if the past is coming to haunt them, it must be something very painful and unpleasant.
But what is the biggest secret?
As I said brilliant update and that is the reason why I am unsure if I understood your message behind this update. I don’t know why I have this feeling that I missed something…but what?
Missing Mano’s edits.
Amy’s VM is lovely - I am annoyed to myself because I don’t understand the lyrics. But VM is beautiful.
I am waiting comments from others, since I left unsure whether I understood your hidden secret behind the update. Or was there any?
Looking forward next update!!!
Secrets are secrets till they are shared. And I have not yet shared the SECRET itself. But that will come after Mehra's secret is revealed. There is definitely a SECRET. Which is the underlying theme of this chapter. But since I have not explicitly mentioned it is very difficult to expect I guess.
DeleteNobody has mentioned it till now as well. So ........... I may not have found it if I were a reader.
Thank you for your great comments. And yes the VM is just lovely. It is sung by the great Hindi actor Amitabh Bachchan. Have you heard of him ?
WOW....What a beautiful chapter.....very different...very very unexpected.....it was like " na kuch keh kar Bhi bahut kuch keh diya".. Loved every bit of it.....this chapter is a straight shooter that has brought forth deepest emotions to the fore & given different depth & dimensions to so many characters......loved the jealousy bit of Samrat.....I used to think on these lines often in the show ....how I wish this angle could have been exploited.......anyway,thanks JJKKL for doing what the creators couldn't .......the art of storytelling is is to create miracles of imagination , to extend the boundaries of the mysterious , to push into the unknown in pursuit of still other unknowns...to reach into one's heart , down into that place where the stories are , bringing up the mystry of oneself......and that's what you have done in this chapter,JJKKL....Fabulous writting..... Regarding Mehra's secret......I think either it will turn out that they know Myrah=Paro or maybe Paro had a twin sister whom Mehras adopted.
ReplyDeleteSUPERB VM.....a special " Thsnk you " for it.
Oh thank you Navya. I had secretly hoped that you all will find it different and like it. Thanks for your great comments. Mehra's secret is about Paro and Myrah. What , why, how, when etc is the only question. So we have to wait for the SECRET...
DeleteGlad you liked the VM. I fell in love with the song the moment I heard it. And Amy made such a wonderful VM.
Look JJ, As usual though am away from IF , am here early :)...Now this chapter shows why there is a secret love for this FF.."Secrets of characters"…beautifully written ..very very unique.."slow claps"..you have detailed the most important yet glossed over details from the original..
ReplyDeleteAmy VM was absolutely beautiful.. My heart felt heavy after watching that..
Be to frank I feel we all are more upset to not see PARUD in the end than the RR ending itself..I would have been honestly happy to see RR ended with PARUD the same day..coz even today I feel that incomplete vacuum whenever I think of RR…Thank you for writers like you for at least trying to fill that vacuum..
P.S. JJ, though I tried to balance my time with real life and IF, now things have started to take a toll in real life and I will be stuck for at least 3 months, hence will be taking a long break from IF..however will try to catch the FFs whenever time permits but can't assure you regular comments buddy..Will try to catch u guys in twitter whenever possible…
Hugs
Deepa
I have to give it to you. It is a secret how you always arrive here on time... Thank you dear. Means a lot to me. That is a good one - secret love for this FF ? HAHA
DeleteYou liked the way I wrote it ? Thank you. I was so bored writing about the events and the emotions and the conversations you see. So I thought what else can I do ?
Yeah I agree the VM is very good. I like that song and it shows Rudra's feelings very well.
I agree with you. We are more upset because we did not get a Parud ending.
And I cannot take any excuses Deepa. Be here as usual. And you have a surprise very soon. .........Sonia's chapter. So keep checking........
Lovely update jj. Its all about inner secret as i too belive every human have their own secret which they wont share with anyone.
ReplyDeleteWaiting fr next update
Jayashree
Thanks Jaya. Yeah we all have secrets which we cannot share with anyone.......Glad you liked the update.
DeleteHolaaaaa JJ dear....:-)
ReplyDeleteI am speeeeechlessssss.....like this is the best chapter so far in my opinion yaar....<3
Kaise kaise sochti Ho tum??? Started with the definition of secret as adjective and noun....I was a bit lost....coz I couldn't understand what u were trying to convey through that....and what followed was like a mysterious revelation of our characters....and I can give u a full 100 marks...but a doubt persists....
About Danveer....he sacrificed for his brother who had done a lot for him...agreed....but then dannu is not happy with it ....agreed....and itna gussa Ki he would love to take revenge on dilsher.... Is that what u tried to convey??? *confused me*
Coz if dilsher had done sacrifices for him...danveer should happily sacrifice for dilsher....no??? Then why he is not happy??? He liked mala....oh that's y??? I can't imagine him like this....maybe that's why I am asking u all these stupid questions....
Sorry JJ....*sheepy me*
Okay shocking one was Sumer 's secret....*lol*
And shadabdi one also *lol*
I felt really bad for that sweet naughty angel.....koel*muah for koel* I hope her secret wish poori hojaye....:-)
And yes rudra's secret dream....once it was my secret dream too....myrah = Paro....:'( want that part really badlyyyy....:-)
And our kaakisa is still a bigda Hua mausam....huhhh??? ;-) loved that part...
And the mehra's are getting on my nerves yaar...Paro n Myrah both their children....nahhhh that can't happen....coz Paro had her parents here only no????*confused me*
Heyyyyy bagwaan iss bhoothni Ke dimaag Mein kya Pak raha he???
*lol*
So all in all JJKL my darling....awesome update....waiting for the next.....
Oh Lachuuuuuuuuu you have poured your heart out. Thanks a lot. Finally you got Danveer's secret.....Thank GOD.
DeleteWhile writing the chapter I felt bad for Koel more than anybody else. Poor baby.
Keep thinking about Mehra's secret. You may find some explanation before I write. And if you find it let me know so that I can change the chapter to a more unbelievable secret HAHA
Glad you liked it Lachu. Thank you.
Ohhhhhh I almost forgot....I was having trouble in publishing my comment....
ReplyDeleteSo
Amy darling.....awesome yaar woh lost feeling aa rahi he Mann me.... after watching the VM....the song never heard before.....loved it Amy....it is beautiful.....*muah*
Thanks on Amy's behalf. The VM is so nice. Did you like the song ? I love it.
Deleteow-Wday! ot-lday f-oday ecrets-sday ou-yday xplored-eday...ice-Nday pdate-uday
ReplyDeletes-aday sual-uday.
JJ... above I wrote in secret codeWink
Surprised with some secrets as I can never think of like that if I compare with what shown in serial, well they changed the original so it's always dilemma for me with some things...
So Mehra's have secret past and worried it might be revealed now... wondering what it might beConfused...
This secret dream and whole update made me nostalgic of the thread "Hope & Faith"...
Rudra's secret dream nowadays. The one he dreams of - Sothe Jaagthe. The dream he has with his eyes open and eyes closed. While driving,while working, while eating , while lying down. A dream that Paro will just get up one morning and remember everything.
... Each and every RRian dreamt, hoped and wished openly ... that one day dear CVs
magically will make M=P. We openly said we don't care about logic or common sense but alas it didn't happened. Ouch
I'm amazed how brilliantly you and Zara trying to give us what RR supposed to be ... Parud hamesha .Clap
@Amy...always enjoyed your VMs and it's always been hard for me to pull my self out of your Vimeo accountLOL Thanks for the VM kid sisHug
@Mano... Me too hoping for your speedy recovery Hug
@Mukti... Nice collage... I was almost got furious why there's no Paro/MyrahEmbarrassed then realised it's about the secrets... today's updateLOL
Take care JJ
Happy Pongal.
WoW lot of secrets you explored. Nice update ? Thank you. As I wrote in one of the replies above I was bored writing the normal way !!
DeleteGlad you all liked it.
I agree. Rudra's dream is our dream too. How much we had wished during the last RR days. We were ready to swallow any nonsense as long as Paro was Myrah.......Hmmmmmmmmmmm
Not to worry. Myrah is Paro in this blog and thread. Nobody can change it. Kah Diya Bas.
I am sure Mukti has hidden Paro somewhere in the edit. We have to look more closely.
The VM was just superb. And I love the song.
Thank you Sush. You made me so happy with your comments.
I am guessing the Mehra's are afraid for anyone to find out that Myrah is not their daughter
ReplyDeleteHAHA.... I cannot let you in onto the secret. Can I ?
DeleteOmg what a super update JJ. Secrets it is. Each and every ranawat have a secret and how well you have described it. So in character. I was in awe while reading it. I will always love u for giving us an insight as to what RR was and could have been.
ReplyDeletePoonam and Rajeev are of course scared about the past coming out
Mano what happ to you? Anyways wishing you a speedy recovery darling
Omg Amy what a VM. They are amazing as always. Nothing to add. It was briliant
Wishing all of you including JJ a Happy Makarsakranti / Pongal
Praba
As I wrote in one of the replies above I was bored writing the normal way !!
DeleteGlad you liked it Praba.
Mano met with an accident. She is fine now. We are waiting for her to come back with a bang.
And the VM - what can I say ? It was simple marvellous.
Wish you too a belated Makarsakranti / Pongal
Intriguing chapter. So many secrets but the most shocking one was Danveer's. And the saddest was Koel's. She is just a kid who deserves better.
ReplyDeleteLoved the update JJ. Your best so far.
DeleteAgree the saddest was Koel's. I myself felt bad. I would have felt the same if I were in her position.
Glad you liked the update. My best so far ? Thank you Rithu
Loved the chapter Clap
ReplyDeleteSecrets all around. Big smile
Thanks Lily.
DeleteFirst today I would like to thank you for the pm otherwise as usual I would have missed this...Smile This chapter was interesting as you explored the mindset of each person and what they are trying to hide. Well I am no Mano but made this for this particular chapter.
ReplyDeleteLovely vm Amy, thanks.Big smile
Mano, I have not thanked you for the amazing edits you do for this series, would like to thank you for those. Yes, I know I am thanking you the one time you did not do edits.Embarrassed
Wonderful edit Mukti. Glad you liked the chapter and the VM. The latter was so beautifully done by Amy. I like that song a lot.
DeleteWhy have you left out Paro in the above edit ? Or is she hidden secretly somewhere ? Is it a riddle like my SECRET ?
That is real interesting that you thank Mano for edits the day she did not post one.Big smile
Wow great story please update soon
ReplyDeleteI can not wait for the next part of your story
Thanks for the PM. Nice update.
ReplyDeleteNice update...
ReplyDeleteThanks for the PM...
awesome update
ReplyDeleteAwesome update
ReplyDeleteAnd lovely VM
Superb update
ReplyDeleteLoved it
Thanks for the pm
Of all the secrets waiting for the Mehras secret. What are they hiding.
ReplyDeletePhenomenal Chapter
ReplyDeleteI will have to read this chapter again when I'm free as I cannot identify
the secret maybe right now my mind is in office so I'll read later
and comment
Great update
ReplyDeleteThanks for pm me
Hey that was a different update
ReplyDeleteGood surprise
Update of secretsShocked
Why don't u update ur secretWink
I mean secret of spiritLOL
On a serious note
Loved this update
Describing ever character,their mind set and stand
That really gives a clear pic on every characterBig smile
Excellent job dear
DeleteHey look who is here.
Yes it was different. I was bored with the normal updates............
My secret is the basis of the story dear. How can I reveal it ?
Did you see the VM ?
loved it yar i cant thyank u enough ...thanks for keep parud s memory alive with ur writing...thnks for the pm...im not good with words so im just going to say thank u again,...
ReplyDeleteBhavi, I am glad that you read the FF. Happy you liked it. And honoured that you wrote down the comments. Does not matter whether you are good with words or not. Neither am I. Just put down your thoughts. That is enough for me. Thank you dear.
Deletewow amazing update loved it thank you for pm.
ReplyDelete"A picture is a secret about a secret, the more it tells you the less you know." Diane Arbus
ReplyDeleteAgain you did an amazing job dear, but I would give my reactions with the help of the following emoticons mentioned below, explaining how I actually felt at that moment...!!!Wink
Secret revenge CryClap
Secret thought TongueClap
Secret fear EmbarrassedClap
Secret hope EmbarrassedEmbarrassedClap
Secret wish EmbarrassedSmileClap
Secret recipe LOLClap
Secret jealousy OuchClap
Secret admiration LOLTongueClap
Secret past ClapClapClap
Secret dream EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedClapClapClapClapClap
Amy a.k.a Preggy "Tussi toh chaa gae ho" LOLClapWink
That is wonderful way of giving comments. You must have put in lot of effort to make the different words in different colors. Thanks dear.
DeleteGlad you liked the secret dream the best Embarrassed
Wonderful quote
Glad you liked the update and the VM. Amy is great indeed.
amazing updateClap
ReplyDeleteunique start of this chapter.really loved it
very well written dear...starting part is super
ReplyDeletethis chapter defined each character's condition.nice one.nice vm too
ReplyDeleteThis was awesome ... very well written chapter, love the detailing of everyone's secrets.
ReplyDeleteDanveer's revenge ... that was a surprise ... yet not unexpected ... you very skilfully wove the real events we saw in the show, into his reasons for revenge ... well done!!!
The first hint of Rajeev and Poonam Mehra's hidden secret ... do they know Myrah is not their daughter? This is getting very interesting. They spent the night in fear and tears ...
Koel and Dhruv - of course their secrets are the most innocent ... poor Koel!
Thanks Dia. I was so bored writing the normal way. Glad you liked it.
DeleteMehras secret has to be revealed. Soooooooooon
Did you watch the VM ?
And yes I felt bad for Koel too when I wrote it.
thanks for the pm Smile
ReplyDeletethis is the first chapter i have read of your ff.. and i really liked how you described each character has a "secret" and how beautifully you gave reasons, story behind all those secretsSmile
and all that you wrote is very realist and close to original rangrasiya story..
danveer had a soft corner for mala and that's the reason he was in touch with her all those years and kept it secret ..humm..
kids secret wish and hope are sweet which any kid would wantSmile
so myrah is paro and had lost memory in your ff Tongue
*will watch the vm later.. Big smile
You are starting from the latest chapter and going backward ? The FF starts from the last few episodes of RR but with a twist and continues from there. Hope you will read from the prologue and let me know your comments.
DeleteGlad you liked Chapter 25
Awesome update...
ReplyDeleteNice update JJ... Very interesting exploration of everyone's thoughts...their secrets... Loved the chapter...
ReplyDeleteNice VM by Amy...
Too good update Love It
ReplyDeletenice update and vm
ReplyDeleteThank you for this impressive update, but above all by the great respect that your words bring readers, all feel this sad disappointment to see RR on spins unsettled and dilution of the characters in comical attempts without success, your story handled with seriousness human conflicts that everyone move, thank you for a wonderful inspiration and share with us "your secret".Wink
ReplyDeleteJJ are great!
DeleteAnny dear. Don't praise me so much that I start floating around. Glad you liked it. Are you a regular reader ? SECRET......will take some time.............Embarrassed
This is a pleasant surprise... Truly unique Thumbs UpThumbs Up
ReplyDeleteit's a dreamy chapter SmileSmile
Thank you JJ ClapClap
I too have a secret dream about Rangrasiya WinkBig smile
As someone here commented maybe Samrat is the person to watch out for
Is he Teju's mole at the Haveli?
And equally dreamy VM by Amy
Here are some beautiful moments from the VM
Oh you made my day. Dreamy VM I agree. Dreamy chapter too ? Thank you dear. Teju's mole ? Hmmmmmm Can be anybody I guess. Except Rudra ? HAHA
DeleteGreat moments you shared from the VM. Thank you.
Awesome update
ReplyDeleteLoved it
Thanks for the pm
Thankyou so much everyone for loving the VM.
ReplyDeleteI don't even know what's wrong but i'm not able to reply to everyone separately on the blog.
Your amazing comments means alot! Didn't expect such response on the VM.
I really feel loved at the moment! <3 Love you all!
I'll reply to all of the people who commented on my VM on IF :P
JJ i'm yet to comment on this chapter as i've not read it yet.
Will comment as soon as possible
Beautiful Chapter with jealousy of Samrat at one side and possibility of Myrah being a twin sister of Paro
ReplyDeleteInteresting chapter
ReplyDeleteAnd loved the VM
See JJ I am here
ReplyDeleteComing to your secret update.I mean your update on secret
The title was very tempting.
You know I like to listen secrets but I don't like to tell secrets to others...
Coming to secrets of ranawat...
Kakusa
poor guy had 3 children but still no pyaar from wife
How can it is possible without pyaar lol
Mala and kakusa look good together but
If there is no mala and dilsher means no rudra na..so my vote goes to this pair only ...
I loved his secret revenge
Mohini
She was one of my fav character.
But how can she hide her hatred
That is highly impossible for her na
I thought She will never change..but CV's suddenly changed her in RR2
Secret thoughts
Her thoughts were horrible...
Maithili
I felt really bad for her
How mohini taunts her for children...
Dhruv
My sweetheart
Initial days of RR2 I too have same hope..
Koel
She is funny girl..
Her wishes are good.
Samrat
Secret jealousy
That was hilarious...
How do you get these many thoughts JJ
Sumer
Tractor wala dil
Secret admiration for rudra..
I was scared that you will say
God dostana types na...
Our hero major rudra pratap ranawat
Hayee name itself enough for me to dream
This was cute and emotional dream
You know my dreams are always for rudra only..
Overall very beautiful update JJ loved it
Omg why so long comment God...
This is not my cup of tea but tried ok..
forget to say lovely VM
Loved each and every scenes
Beautiful VM
Missed mano' edits and collages..
Wow this one was awesome
ReplyDeleteBeautiful write up JJ
everyone has a secret
I m actually suprised with sumers ... he admired Rudy boy ;)
Now I m missing Tejawat .. When will he back ... actually waiting to know about the caller who informed him about Myrah
Lovely VM
You guys are doing great job
you tell everyone secret very well...Thumbs Up
ReplyDeletelove your all updateHeart
waiting for next...
Very nice..
ReplyDeleteahhh so many secrets
ReplyDeleteeveryone has some secret or the other
which will come out
lets see
hmmmm what past are the mehras hiding
wow didnt know kakusa liked mala
or the fact that sumer admires rudra
but i feel for koyel
poor thing she has no parents
even though they are there
sad naa
maithili isnt really that timid
but she has no other option
and her hubby well hope one day he will find his voice
ahhh now it comes to rudra
am sure he will have his paro
and dhruv his mother