RR through our eyes (Chapter 28)
Valentine’s
Day Special
Thanks Mano for the edits.
And 100% unadulterated writing from Sonia
Rudra was standing right in front of her, so close that she could feel the heat emanating from his hard body. Paro was good as trapped by the cold wall flush behind her back and the hard, warm chest of a wall----- Rudra in front of her, his body almost touching hers and she felt exhilarated
He saw her pupils dilate, her lips
quiver, the pulse at her throat beat erotically and his own desire flared.
Rudra wondered if she would push him away but she didn’t. Instead, she looked
into his eyes, full of passion. Placing one of his hands on the wall next to
her head, he leaned in even further
His eyes went to her bow-shaped, pink
succulent lips beguiling him, begging to be kissed and he tried to move in even
closer but Paro reminded him, although her voice betrayed her desire, “Rudra……kal humari shaadi hai….tomorrow is
our wedding.” and he thought of the fact that he was already married to
her. Of course, she wasn’t aware of the fact so, he moved away slightly
Then an idea struck him and he brought
his other hand, the one with the single rose that he had plucked, just for her.
She saw his other hand and was stunned to see a single beautiful red rose,
perfect on a long green stalk as it came in her line of vision.
Genuinely astounded at the gesture, she
looked up at him and asked expectantly, “Rudra…..yeh
mere liye hai…..this is for me .......?” and he saw sheer happiness on her
face, the glint of joy in her big doe eyes
and she simply glowed
Nodding to her, he told her teasingly, “Phir mut kehna kay mein nay tujhay kabhi
phool nahi laakar diya….don’t tell me
later that I never brought you flowers.” reminding her of her complaint
earlier and she was utterly delighted.
Her hand reached out to take the flower
from his hand but he told her to wait. Paro waited patiently and he didn’t make
any attempt to move away or hand her the rose. But, nothing had prepared her
for the shock of what he did next!
The cool, velvety petals of the rose
first brushed against her cheeks, one at a time, then her soft lips and she
stood mesmerized, stunned at the sensual gesture, unable to breathe for a
second. It was as if the velvety petals of the flower had kissed her and she
closed her eyes for a second, suddenly finding it very hard to inhale.
But, he was not done yet as he further
shocked her by bringing the same rose to his lips. Seeing him kiss the petals
of the red rose slowly as he watched her eyes, Paro felt weak in the knees at
this intimate act. Rudra had only kissed the petals on the rose so, why did she
feel as if she had been kissed by him on her mouth?
Paro’s pulse raced as she suddenly wanted
to feel his full, sensual lips on her own. The lips that had kissed the flower
enthralled her and she wanted to experience them on hers. Moment ago, she had
been slightly reluctant and stopped him, reminding of their wedding the next
day but now, she felt hot and bothered!
How had she ever thought him to be cold
and unromantic, Paro pondered?! The man could certainly send her in a tizzy;
arouse her to frenzy by a mere look, by his slightest touch! By the myriad of
emotions crossing her face, Rudra knew that she was flustered and he reveled in
her reaction to him.
He was once again reminded of how Paro
had always been rattled by his nearness, her voice going all “kuchhad mucchad” as she had often
expressed to him.
The manner in which she looked at
him----in particular, at his lips, her eyes slightly glazed as they perused him
and his face - sent shivers down his spine. What he wouldn’t do to just grasp
her beautiful face in his hands and kiss the living daylights out of her, Rudra
thought excitedly!
However, it was simply not going to
happen. They were to be married tomorrow. It was just one more night before he
could have her in his arms, in his bed, to be his wife once again. Then, he
could love her to his heart’s desire. But, she was making it so hard for him.
Only if she would stop staring at him with such love in her eyes!
Before he lost control of his senses and
did something that they should wait to do, Rudra moved away slightly. Was it
disappointment on her face he saw, Rudra thought happily? Handing her the rose,
he told her that he could get flowers for her if she so desired and she looked
absolutely thrilled at his declaration
Next moment, her arms went around him and
she hugged him, tightly as she snuggled her face against his massive chest. Not
one to back off, Rudra’s arms came out to gather her close to his body and he
closed his eyes at the wonderful sensation of her having in his arms, in his
life again.
Paro felt overwhelmed with feelings, too
deep and strong. Suddenly, she felt afraid of being swept away, drowned in the
sea of emotions. What was about this man, about being in his arms that
comforted her so?
Why did it feel like she truly belonged
there? Why did it feel like she was meant to be here, always? It felt perfect
to be with him like this, safely wrapped in the warm cocoon of his body,
protected from the world----she felt like she was finally home!
His hands caressed her back and she
enjoyed the feel of his affectionate touch, so soothing. In response, her arms
stroked his back fondly. The feel of her soft body curved into his did manage
to fan the flames of yearning that had already been stoked, long time ago.
He shifted uncomfortably as he could feel
his body tightening in response to her nearness. While he hated to push her
away from him, he forced himself to do so lest he act out on his deepest
desires and make love to her. He had to remind himself to wait one more night
before he could claim her again.
Paro felt his arms slackening around her,
the slowing in the movement of his hands around her back and she raised her
head to look up at him.
Rudra saw the query in her eyes but he
said, “……apna gift tou dekh lay….Have a
look at your gift......” and then, he slowly detangled himself from her
even though he loathed leaving her. All he really wanted to do was to take her
back in his arms but it had to wait for a while
Eager to see what he had brought for her,
Paro walked towards the bed and she picked up the beautifully wrapped package.
Turning back to look at him, she asked him animatedly, “Is mein kya hai, what is in this Rudra…..?,” even as she had
already started untying the bow on it
Folding his arms on his chest, he merely
smiled at her enthusiasm and replied,
“Khol kar tou dekh……open it and
see......” and she had already ripped the package as if a kid in
excitement. Lifting the lid from the box, Paro delved in and found a deep blue
sari and she looked up at him, her eyes full of astonishment and love
He asked her, “Sari hai tere liye…a saree for you..neele rang mein…in blue color....pasand
aayi….did you like it .....?”
Of course, she liked it, Paro thought.
How could she not like it? Not only was it an exquisite gift but because he had
selected for her. This was a gift that he had personally handpicked for her and
she loved it!
Her voice breaking, she looked at him and
replied, “Bohat acchi hai, Rudra…it is
very beautiful…I love it……” and he saw her hug the fabric close to her
heart as she asked him, “Yeh tumhara
favorite color hain naa…this is your favourite color - right..?” as she
recalled Dhruv telling her that sometime ago and he nodded
Suddenly, he had the insane urge to see
her draped in his gift. As long as he lived, he would never forget how sinfully
gorgeous she had looked that night in Jaipur, dressed in red sari as she had
danced with him.
Her body moving next to his, in his arms was
still etched in his memory. He had almost kissed her on the dance floor that
night! That was also the night when he had slept with her in his arms as
husband and wife, Rudra reminisced of the days past
Seeing the happiness in her eyes, he felt
satisfied. But that was not enough, so he said, “Agar itni accha laga hai tohfa…....tou pehen kar dikha…if you liked it
so much .…wear it and show me.....”
“Abhi pehen kar dikhaayoon tumhein, Rudra……really, you want me
to change right now….?” Paro asked him fretfully
and he nodded in response.
As Paro tried to think of wearing the
sari for him, he walked around her and sat on the bed. Paro immediately asked
him anxiously, “Rudra……tum yahaan kamrey
mein rahogey……tou mein change kaisi karoongi….if you remain in the room how
will I change.....?”
He wanted to tell her that he had seen
her before but soon realized that it was not an option. She didn’t remember any of it. So, he told
her that he would turn his back and she could change it then. Embarrassed at his
suggestion, she hesitated before looking up at him but he appeared to be
determined to stay in the room.
Paro wondered how she could take off her
clothes while he stayed in the room and stood there for a while, considering
her options before making her way to the bathroom. He smiled when he heard the
door close behind her and waited but with great impatience.
Few minutes later, Paro walked out and he
just stood there, motionless, unable to move or say anything. The softest blue
fabric of the sari swathed her petite figure perfectly, covering where needed
yet revealing just enough creamy, flawless skin in all the right places to
tease all his senses mercilessly
She was wearing the waist chain. She had also
done something new with her hair. Made it somehow longer. And she looked just
the way she was years back. Her straight silky hair lay softly on her back, the
wispy bangs adorning her lovely face as her charismatic hazel eyes looked at
his, searching, waiting eagerly for his approval. He knew she waited to hear from
him and he wanted to tell her that she looked absolutely beautiful. It was a
dream come true for Rudra.
Paro watched him as his gaze traveled
along her body leisurely, from head to toe and then back again, pure adulation
vividly evident and she couldn’t help but feel exultant. His dark eyes seemed
to be twin flames, heating her skin right through the delicate fabric of her
sari and she trembled at the intensity of his scrutiny.
Finally, he moved towards her, his eyes
never leaving hers. In a few long and powerful strides, he came to stand in
front of her and then his hands came out to touch her on her arms, gently and
slowly.
His touch made her skin tingle and she
asked him, her voice quivering, expectant,
“Mein kaisi lag rahi hoon, Rudra….how do I look ....?”
The appreciation, the hunger, the
lust-----it was all there, reflected clearly in his eyes as he gazed upon her
lush feminine form. Paro saw it all, unmistakably in the depth of his deep
russet brown eyes yet she wanted to hear the words. Rudra understood what she
was asking for and told her that she looked ravishing.
Ecstatic at his compliment, she smiled at
him. Then, her smile wavered as she felt his hands move their way from her arms
to her elbows and then to her waist. Pulling her in towards him as she landed
against his hard, muscular chest, he held her and she placed her hands on his
shoulders
Her pulse quickened with excitement as
she felt the heat from his body radiating to hers, warming her in the process.
Large masculine hands splayed across her back, caressing her gently as he
looked into her eyes.
Not a word was spoken between them but
then perhaps, they were not really needed. The unmistakable bonfires of raw
desire in his eyes were hard to miss as he stared hungrily at her lips.
Recalling how he had touched her lips earlier with the flower petals and then
kissed it himself, Paro felt restless.
Suddenly, she really wanted him to kiss
her! Surely, there was no harm in that, she thought. After all, they would be
married soon. He saw her pink little tongue come out to lick the corner of her
lips nervously and that was his undoing!
Groaning with unbearable need that
wrenched his gut, he leaned in and placed his mouth on hers. Her fingers
tightened on his shoulders, digging into the flesh as she felt his warm lips on
her own. The mild pressure of his firm lips on her soft ones felt utterly,
totally delicious and she sighed before leaning into him.
Brushing his lips against hers, he kissed
her softly. His lips moved to kiss her rosy cheeks, her eyelids, and her chin.
Her eyes closed as she felt his affectionate kisses on her face and she heaved
a sigh in pure delight. The sweet kisses, the gentle caresses kindled the
intensity of feelings buried in her heart and she hugged him back, possessively
holding him in her arms, as if to never let him go
Feeling Paro reciprocating his embrace,
he became bolder and his lips on hers became more demanding. Firm yet loving,
he deepened the kiss, his tongue lightly licking the contour of her lips. Paro
felt a jolt as she felt the wetness of his tongue but her lips eagerly parted
to his tacit demand.
As her lips opened under his, Rudra’s
tongue delved into the dark, soft recesses of her mouth. She tasted just as
sweet as he had remembered. It had been so long and it felt just as incredible
kissing her, Rudra thought as he took complete possession of her mouth
The way he held her while his tongue
licked and probed the inside of her mouth made her shiver uncontrollably. She
felt his warm tongue lick the walls of her cheek, rub against her teeth and
even taste her tongue and she held onto him, her nails digging into his flesh.
Paro mimicked his movements, her tongue
coming out to duel with him. Pleasantly surprised by her response, Rudra
groaned with pleasure. His heartbeat accelerated when he felt her kissing him
back, her tongue in his mouth, licking and loving him just as he had been doing
Groaning with palpable need, his arms
tightened around her back as they kissed, deeply and passionately. She felt his
teeth pulling at her lower lip as he sucked on it ardently. Paro’s head was
spinning as their mouths fused in the intimate clash of lips and tongue and her
hands moved to the nape of his neck before tangling themselves tightly into his
hair.
Feverish with desire, she didn’t mind as
his hands caressed her partially bare back and hips. Wherever his fingers
touched and stroked her flesh, she burned as if he had managed to set her body
on fire-----a fire that might only be quenched by their coming together.
Rudra felt the tightening of his body as
blood gushed to the parts of his body in response to the beautiful woman in his
arms. A part of his brain badgered him to stop before he got lost in the
tumultuous storm that threatened to consume his very being.
However, his body throbbed and ached for
her. He would stop soon, Rudra mentally tried to convince himself as his lips
traced a path down her chin to her delicate, long neck. Stopping to kiss the
pulse at the base of her throat, he licked the tender, soft flesh and she
moaned.
He recalled Paro being sensitive to his
kisses around her neck and he kissed her as just as she used to like and she
whimpered in response. Before, he could move down any further, Paro lifted her
head and looked at him.
Both were breathing hard, their eyes
glazed as she held his face in her hands and placed her lips on his own.
Startled but overjoyed by her taking charge, Rudra gathered her in his arms.
Who was he to deny her when she wanted him just as much as he wanted her, he rationalized?
The long lost lovers kissed as if parched
for each other and then she further astounded him by moving her lips to kiss
his cheeks and he sighed deeply. Then, her lips moved to kiss his chin and she
trailed her mouth down to his neck, kissing him just as he had done moments
ago.
He was already on perilous ground and
here she was, pushing him to the brink of insanity! Her soft lips as she kissed
his neck sent his pulse racing, a million miles a second and he felt like
screaming. The large, inviting bed behind them beckoned to him.
A couple of steps he took and Paro’s
knees came in contact with the edge of the bed. Another movement and she
tumbled backwards, and Rudra followed her on the bed. It took great effort but
he managed to break his fall by using his arms, avoiding hurting her just in
nick of time.
Paro lay on the bed with Rudra half
reclining on top of her. Her senses were still all over the place from their
recent amorous encounter. Her lips tingled and so did her body from his gentle
caresses. She looked into his eyes and the heat emanating from them seared her,
right through her very soul.
She was trapped. In a better position
than last time. And she loved it.
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Ahhh....JJ...Sonia and Mano..
ReplyDeleteSimply delicious!!
Don't know which part to pick and comment on!!
The whole encounter is just luscious. :)
Waiting to see how what happens in the "trap". Wink
Kerrie
Hey you are first again. And for the most important chapter.
DeleteYes it is delicious, yummylicious, luscious, sensuous, everything one can think of.
Oh now we are interested in the trap - are we ?
I'm still thinking what to say.....very mills n boon like writing style.
ReplyDeleteAnita, think fast and please comment. Glad you liked it
DeleteHi JJ , Sonia , Mano Hug Just read the chapter 28 , its amazing Smile Superb job Sonia as usualSmile
ReplyDeleteSpecial mention to Mano , your edits were amazing and just rightly fit with Sonia's words .. it was superb Clap Looks like you have taken lots of pain to get the edits up .. I guess Sanaya in green sari pic was from another show of hers right ? And also the june 20 epi shots that you used , looks like you have changed the Bindi of Paro to look like Myrah ? Smile
It must have been a lott of work .. thank you for taking a lot of time for putting out a beautiful story for us PaRud fans out here Smile
Sonia is the best. Thanks dear for reading and liking it.
DeleteAnd yes Mano spent quite sometime to come up with the edits for this chapter. And aren't they just wonderful ?
Awesome job Jackal,Sonia and Mano!
ReplyDeleteDid you by chance mean 100 percent adulterated jackal?!!!Wink Thanks Sonia. Friends with benefits you guys are in reshmas words. Mano once again you topped it with your beautiful edits.
Me likey very much.
Read it only once...worth reading many many more times...araam se!!,
Will then comment bhee araam se.
Bye.
Ps: wonder how many here imagined themselves in Paros place and had LOTS OF FUN?!!!
Oh don't thank me. It is all unadulterated (or adulterated as you call it) Sonia.
DeleteI disagree with the "Friends with benefits" part. Sonia does not benefit anything from me !! I do benefit completely with her chapter. So I am taking advantage of her - right ? Sonia dear, sorry about that.
Same holds for Mano too. I am again taking advantage of her for many weeks now Wink
Aaraam Se read Kijiye and come back and comment more.
PS: Do you think anybody will confess ?
Hehehe...hehehe...your last line,JJ has me laughing like a mad woman...it's funny , how sometimes just one small sentence can crack you up so much ,lol
DeleteAm so glad I could make you laugh. I think I have written before also. I take it as the greatest compliment when others find what I write funny. So thank you Navya.
DeleteAnd I can understand. Sometimes we find even the smallest things funny.
aha !!! I see people are asking that we should come and confess!!!
DeleteLOL...koi nahi karne wala !!! ROFL
JJ which part do you actually want us to confess.
DeleteI confess that my hubby showers me with gifts and roses too.
And I am sure Ruchi, Prati and deeps will too confess about the gifts part. As we can be termed as friends( with an S) with benefits.
Need to get my eyes tested. Saw it as "I confess that my hubby showers with me"
Deletevery seductive and enjoyable
ReplyDeleteThanks Madiha. It is all Sonia and Mano
DeleteWow!Wonderfully ardent and deliciously decadent!Lovely sensuous writing letting our minds delve into the beautiful Parud scenes we imagined!Thoroughly enjoyed it.Thanks to Mano who always pleases with her edits and the writer who is amazing!All you guys deserve big hugs on this teddy day!What a treat to the run up to Valentines Day!Cant wait for the next chapter.Surely we will have the leg over in the shaant position?
ReplyDeleteGlad you loved it Shilpa.
DeleteI had enough people pull my leg or the "leg over leg" in the last chapter. Some have given me a warning to not write anything remotely romantic. So we need to see how the next chapter goes.
Yes together Sonia and Mano have created an episode.
wow awesome update loved it thank you for pm..........ameena671
ReplyDeleteThanks Ameena for reading and commenting. Glad you liked it
DeleteVery nice...JJ...sensual yet one could feel the emotional connect that parud share...especially rudra and his tussle....I loved how he is fighting his attraction and also has to be aware that paro is still ignorant of certain facts....
ReplyDeleteThank you.
DeleteGlad you loved it.
Can you please mention your name ?
is it okay if we faint
ReplyDeletehaila
wow that was sizzling
just a kiss or two
and this is what happened
if they were to carry on what would happen then
then we all burn with them
wow they love torturing one another
and in process us too
awww they were reconnecting this way
she looked amazing in the saree
his paro again
some things you can forget and yet know
wow man that was some make out session
there is only so much they can control
and after that one hell of amazing kiss how to stop
but stop they must
and rudra dont call her paro what ever you do mate
that would ruin things
omg they are getting married
haiyye the way the rose kissed her and then him
uffff that was so personal
just beautiful
Hey Kritika,
DeleteWasn't that yummylicious ? Glad you loved it. It is all thanks to Sonia and Mano
And JJ you do not have to write a note. The difference between yours and Sonia's writing is so obvious. I just grazed through the chapter. Will comment after second and thorough reading.
ReplyDeleteJust have to say Sonia and you are Friends with benefits.
Trust you to say that about the note. See below for comment about "Friends with benefits"
DeleteWonderful update!
ReplyDeleteThe story is going so beautifully! Can't wait for Geetanjali to figure out the truth and for the Mehras to find out that Rudra has known all along...
-FleurDeJuillet
Thank you dear. Glad that you came back to the blog. Was wondering where you were
DeleteAh you are still remembering by story after this Vday special ? Thank you.
Its simply Superb. Perfect Valentine treat for all readers. SmileYou described full sequence in very beautiful way.Keep it up... n thanks a lot for the PM.
ReplyDeleteFinally you are here. Only Sonia's chapter could bring you here. I am so glad you liked it. Hope to see you more frequently here.
Deleteawesome updates JJ.Clap
ReplyDeleten V'day post is so so so...WinkEvil Smile
thank you for esp treatHeart
@ Mano your edits r awesome
Thanks dear. I don't know which one is better. The writing or the edits. Glad you liked it
Deleteawesome update
ReplyDeleteThanks dear
DeleteHmmm...I am thinking...What should I say now...chalo,I will try...In one word it was ...SENSEOUS Clap
ReplyDeleteIn two words...painfully SENSEOUS ..Clap...each & every time I read your writting Sonia, it's a revelation...revelation to the world of romance that you capture so beautifully without making it cheap or vulgar & therein lies your strength ... the entire chapter is so nicely and smoothly flowing that I too got flowed with it even without knowing...every bit of it, I loved to the core ... Seriously, how do you do it every time...each time it's seductive , desirous without an iota of vulgarity...Reading the whole chapter was so beautiful an experience that I felt like I am drifting off to some oo la la land...Everything you wrote was written in pure perfection... what's more it was so visual that I could literally see it happening with Ashish & Sanaya...
Thank you Mano for all your efforts in coming up with Absoulutly bang on edits ...they are always 'ek se badh kar ek' but this time toh you have taken the cake...it must have taken a lot of time , energy & efforts ...just want you to know that your hard work is really really appreciated & acknowledged by all of us...
And now a big ' thank you ' to JJKKL who came up with this FF...you truly are one of a kind JJKKL .. you sure know how to keep your readers on tenterhooks who are left with eagerness and excitement for the next chapter .
Painfully Sensuous is the right word Navya. Sonia's writing is always sensuous. And this chapter reminded me of what we miss nowadays. Only if RR had got great TRPs we would have seen all this in the scene. Kaash .............
DeleteAnd yes Mano is really excellent with her edits.
Please don't thank me Navya. It is completely Sonia's and Mano's effort. If at all I only constrained Sonia's writing Embarrassed
Fabulous Update
ReplyDeleteThanks you
DeleteMano...your edits are simply amazing. I saw you used KKGSR from IPKWink Thanks for all the hard work you put into it these edits that are a wonderful accompaniment to this wonderful wonderful FF.
ReplyDeleteJJ and Sonia....this chapter collaboration has me at a loss of words...
let just say I did this
then this...
that is how great, amazing, wonderful, delightful, sensuous and a whole lot of words that I can't think of right now because you'll did this to me with this valentine special...now I need time to recover.
Mukti,
DeleteThis is the chapter Mano took most time for. And the fact is that she did it with her injured hand. I am so indebted to her.
And yes about Sonia's writing - is there any need to say anything ? Her writing is such that we feel we are seeing the scenes in front of our eyes. Wonderful
Recover fast. And be ready for the next week's update.
PS: I loved the way you fell down in the GIF.
JJKKL , Sonia & Mano !! Thank you all for making my Valentine special.
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it tiniaa
DeleteLoved the special valentine chapter Clap
ReplyDeleteWow wow wow
Yes indeed. It is WoW. I felt the same when I read it first.LOL
DeleteAwesome job ladies!!! Loved the update!!!
ReplyDeleteGlad you loved it.
DeleteOMG...what the heck was that...Excuse me while I go get myself a tall glass of ice cold water.LOL
ReplyDeleteSonia , thank you for this passion filled Vday treat...Mano, ur edits were perfectly done...all the hard work has paid off...JJ, I am eagerly waiting to know what happens nextLOL...Loved the gifts Rudra brought for Paro...the way he used the rose petals to kindle paro's desire was fantastic
Drink drink drink - all the water you can.
DeleteYes Mano did put in so much of effort and it paid off for sure.
Eagerly waiting ? That is good to know. Did you forget all about my story in the meantime ? HAHA
JJ, you made this update a little hard for me to read. I wasn't sure what to focus on Mano's collages or Sonia's writing. Both were stupendous. Thank you for the wonderful Valentine's gift. Its nice to see Rudra and Paro surrender to the moment and forget the rest of the world for awhile.
ReplyDeleteI understand Rithu. While posting it I kept reading and staring and delayed the whole process...
DeleteI agree - only if we had got more such moments in the screen. Sanish would have acted them out so well.
I also am unable to decide which is better - the writing or the edits.
Dearest JJ,
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, thank you for considering me to be a part of your brilliant and wonderful FF. I am humbled by your love, my friend and it is very much appreciated.
Mano dear, you have done a splendid and amazing job by giving your readers a scrumptious feast for eyes. The words have been brought alive by your beautiful pictures. You have certainly exceeded my expectations for sure. Great job!
Thank you everyone for all your love and comments. Glad you liked and enjoyed the romantic update and took your time to comment and share your thoughts with us all. Happy Valentine's Day to all!
Love,
Sonia
I am so happy that you wrote these chapters for the blog. Thanks a lot.
DeleteAnd both you and Mano deserve a standing ovation.
You both made the chapter almost like an episode.
Thanks a lot.
Thank u for the pm. Else I would have missed out on such wonderful update. Very sensuous. Rudra has been holding himself in control for quiet sometime. He wants his Paro back with him. Lovely gift for the valentine.
ReplyDeleteHey glad you loved it. Hope you have read Sonia's writing before. She is too good. And Mano is incomparable.
DeleteYes, I have read Sonia's writing. I am a fan of her writings.
DeleteAwesome update
ReplyDeleteWhat a fantabulous Valentine day treat guys !!!!
ReplyDeleteMano, Sonia and JJ... you guys are awesome. Each is a pro in their field of work. Prepping myself to write more... but I need to read it ...once again!!!
I shall be back
More Pros are around. Prati in non-veg thoughts
DeleteReshma in positions
Aur Bolna Hai Kya ?
ReplyDeleteWhoa... Shocked
What the hell? Damn it...sensuous one word...bas Blushing
Arrey me blusssinggg Blushing
Sonia ji my goodness... Embarrassed this is sooo damn hot... Embarrassed
And I loved the way he tried to refrain himself...and alas Jo hona dha woh hogaya... LOL
Loved it loved it loved it... I am like stunned with ur writing that I don't know which part to pick as my favourite...*blussinggg hyperventilating me* LOL
And Mano darling u rocked with ur collages... Thumbs Up
Awesome Mano...u even removed paro's bindhi to give a Myrah look...and rose in between...wooowww...i loved it...and got a glance of khusssiii tooo... Wink
Awesome...da
JJKKL dear...mubarak Ho... Hug Wink so this FF is turning into a big collaboration of writers... Clap which is an ahmazing thing...again...
Surprise indeed it was a surprise... Big smile
Anddd my blusssing smiley worked wooopieee...i am so happy...today it was dhim tana the epic dhim tana in Malayalam rr...Blushing
Hats off to you Sonia dear..U managed to pull out a less level romance as per JJ's taste :)..I know coz I have read all other stories of yours and know the romance quotient in them :))))))..Well proving again what a versatile writer you are ..Great job sonia…
ReplyDeleteBut should tell the real hero of this chapter is you "Mano dear" ..no offense Sonia and JJ (I know you are capable of any kind of writing ) but those collages screams Mano's hardwork and that too with her injury, she has done one hell of a work..Mano dear, you simply really deserve a standing ovation…"claps"…
JJ, nice collaboration, appreciate you for giving us a romantic chapter during the valentines day corner…Now am really trapped to know the secrets how its going to unfold…:)
Thank you all for doing this inspite of busy schedule…Heartfelt appreciation :)
rly a valentine's gift.best chap of this ff.red rose scene,saree scene n the romance which bloomed after that was so beautiful with perfect edits
ReplyDeleteReading the last chapter
ReplyDeleteFAINTED
ohh ma.. this was really HOTT..Blushing
ReplyDeletesensuous to the core.. Embarrassed
Rudra definitely can make you weak in knees by a mere look Blushing
you could picture this happening as chapter is so well written Clap Sonia you are a starStar
rose part picture by mano is awesumTongue you could picture it perfectly like written in the story.
i am going to read it again and this time more slowly to enjoy it moreEmbarrassedLOL
thanku JJKKL, Mano and Sonia it was an awesome update and treat for a valentines day, a romantic sensuous update on a hot couple Parud Heart
just loved it..
thanku for the pm JJKKL
DeleteGlad you liked it Pree. Embarrassed
Sonia's writing and Mano's editing is like Sone Pe Suhaaga
Awesome update
ReplyDeleteThanks for the pm
Hubba Hubba Hubba...
ReplyDeleteBlushing Blushing Blushing...
Oh boy, I am blushing...
Wow What is going on?
Rudra trying to back off and deciding to a wait until marriage and Myrah/Paro not letting him? Paro taking the initiative here too...
But Paro has always been like that...
She is a woman who knows what she wants and goes after it Big smile
He first brushed the rose against her lips and then against his? - desi dear how do you come with this stuff?
Your writing of sensuous scenes is 'velvety' smooth... You make it look effortless...
'She trapped and she liked it' - This line is a crowd pleaser
It seems to make young girls' heart flutter, go weaker at the knees...
So what happens next? My guess is somebody is going to interrupt them...
MM, How long did it take to make this? How did you do that, turning Paro into Myrah and adding the rose?
Great creativity and imagination at work here...
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Hi Betti,
DeleteGlad you liked the velvety smooth romance. Sonia is the certified EXPERT in this area.Embarrassed
Mano did an awesome job with the edits. No doubt. And she did say that this was the most difficult one for her to make. Hats off.
Ah finally one person mentioned the last line. Though the line itself is not completely correct. I added that line Betti. I added. (Taking great pride...)
Last chapter it was " She was trapped. And she liked it."
And this chapter it is "She was trapped. In a better position than last time. And she loved it."
You added the last line?
DeleteIn that case let me tell you that, that was the best line in the whole chapter Thumbs Up
(Sonia you don't mind, do you?)
First time trapped and she liked it, the second time she loved it, how will she feel the third time?
And how will she be trapped? Whoa, few days spent in this thread and I am getting ideas
Psagars, JJKKL and others - I am really enjoying all the banter that's been going on about JJ's romance writing..
ReplyDeleteYou guys are hilarious... You all crack me up...
Peeps, Stop giving JJ grief over her 'vanilla' romance.
JJ, I don't think your romance-writing in chapter 27 is bland at all...
It's not too spicy either, It's just right Thumbs Up
You have trouble describing intense scenes, so you enlisted Sonia's help?
I hope you soon gain enough experience (in writing, that is) so you can write passionate scenes without anyone's help Wink LOL
Maybe your next FF
You are enjoying the banter without coming to my protection. Betti Aapse Yeh Umeed Nahin Thi. .Sob Sob.Anyway better late than never. You came at least after I was defeated. It takes more guts to side up with the defeated person - right ?
DeleteAh my romance is just right. Thank you Thank you.
And thanks for the wishes. I will gain more experience (in writing that is) for the next FF.
Singing - Hum Honge Kamiyaab ........Ek din...........
@bold Sorry about that JJ, but sometimes, defeat can be a good thing...
DeleteYes, Hum Honge Kamiyaab Ek Din..
Fabulous Update Love It
ReplyDeletetysm for pm
JJ ,Sonia, Mano excellent Work, a great team, really nice romance.
ReplyDeletePlease we need mistery and intrigue too!
waiting news
Thanks Anny.
DeleteThis romance is very essential for the story to move forward. So please hold on for two more weeks. Then we will come back to the intrigue part. Like you I am also a big fan of mystery.
Oh my goodness JJ,Sonia
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely and sensuous write up
Loved it...Loved it...Loved it... Big smile
God very hard to handle this much hotness...
Everywhere hot hot hot...
Ufff...
And mano darling your edits are something else
Added extra charm to this chapter...
Lovely mano...
Ah Meenu, was waiting for you. Yes I agree. Too much hot in here. We need a cooling period. So next chapter will be towards next weekend. Mano also has to be back. Till then happy drooling
DeleteUffff,.... I'm struggling to come out from valentines treat given by you guys :D ""SENSUOUS UPDATE""
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written by Sonia *claps* ... And once again mano proved that she is the queen of edits :)
Aaahhh their passion, desire, sensuous and hotness...!!!!
My words are falling short to express it.. I just love it :)
Thank you so much JJ for sharing it :)
Amazing valentines special update JJ ...
ReplyDeleteLoved it
and mano wonderful collages ..
you guys are doing awesome job ...
Hii JJ, sonia n mano
ReplyDeleteAwesome work, loved chapter, with amazing way u write everything, many small small n cute moments n things, 👌👌
This was beautiful and sensuous Valentine’s Day chapter.
ReplyDeleteI took me like three days to write my comment – I was so shocked after reading this steamy chapter.
Parud romance is always a good thing. When the chapter ended as it ended I look forward to what happens next… Will the next chapter continue from where this ended? Waiting…
BUT, I still hope that the story continues soon and I hope Paro recalls her memory before the marriage.
AND I am still waiting for secrets to reveal…
Special thanks to Mano, your edits are absolutely stunning. Your edits bring to life the entire update.
Waiting for next update!
Wonderful update
ReplyDeleteLoved it
Thanks for the pm
Wow what a sensous update JJ and that too on Valentines day. Super stuff
ReplyDeleteWishing you, Sonia and Mano and all my darling friends a belated Valentines day. Apologies for the delayed response
Brilliant collages by Mano as usual and of course the sensuous writing queen Sonia for the unadulterated parts. . What a passionately hot update and cant wait to read more. But hope they dont cross the line cos Myrah has still not regained memory and hope she does soon. But a hot update and thank you so much JJ for the pm.
Love
Praba
It was amazing update
ReplyDeleteIt was full of passion
it was written very well
Thanks for your pm